Aet Lindling

"break ur neck" "Non of ur business" Um. Cute. Devils are toootally going to be talking like that. This needs a large amount of proofreading and grammar/spelling fixing.

No, it isn't. You need to do fiction. It can have aspects that are real, such as Coca-Cola, or living in New York, but the actual story is fiction.

Wow, people who like twilight are on this forum? Haha, it's just that I was on this other writers forum and everyone there was weird and completely jealous of stephenie ...

"kneeled = knelled" Incorrect. lordgluzman is right, it is spelled kneeled.

In my opinion, the prologue is okay, but the chapter is the worst thing I have evar written evar. >< Prologue: If someone dies, does anyone really care? I doubt ...

I'm a bit torn as to whether this is supposed to be hilarious or if I'm supposed to read this solemnly.

Change it to R. Your friend will still be able to see it. Just hit the Edit button on the post.

Offensive and stupid. Even for rap, this had no point, the rhymes were forced, and it was generally bad. You need to post 2 reviews now, which you should've done ...

This would be better as a short story or a longer and more descriptive poem. As it is, it leaves too many questions unanswered. Sometimes stories are better with questions ...

On a small note, swearing is allowed in writing (just not posts in non-writing topics), so unless you censored this because of personal beliefs or something it'd be perfectly fine ...

I am humbled. (but I will also add that I laugh whenever someone tells me that I shouldn't say I dislike emos in a thread because it's about loving emos.)

You need to write 2 reviews because of the 2:1 review:work rule. (Does anyone read the Rules before posting anymore?) This was okay in the beginning and middle, but the ...

Normal is a setting on a dishwasher. Normal is not supposed to be humans. If you are normal, you are boring. In fact, it is impossible to really be absolutely ...

Yah okay firt of all I DONT DRINK COFFEE! Holy crap, what an example of this intelligence you speak of! What great abilities to recognize sarcasm! yah You know what....Stop ...

An octillion and twenty-eight percent, even. You almost made me wake up my dad in convulsions of laughter, meanie. "Nice April Fool's prank. You're fired." *convulses again* No like seriously. ...